Sample edited and unedited resumes

Many Taiwanese seem reluctant to improve their SOPs too much for fear their English ability may appear better than that indicated by standardized tests or interviews. However, I don't think there is any reason to have the same concern regarding resumes. After all, there are standard ways of expressing job responsibilities and performance metrics. Even if English is not your first language, I think your resume should look pretty cleaned up. Below is an edited resume with the original information a student gave me. Hopefully it will motivate some to reexamine their resumes.

Sample Resume 1